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Post by chasesangel on May 28, 2007 11:33:02 GMT -5
I was depressed, thinking of Chase and his relationship with his father, and this is what I got, You don't know me you don't even care you leave me here hanging But you never came
You promised you'll be here for me you promised you'll always come to see me but you never came and I said I never cared
And everyday you said you'll come You promised this time'll be different And I was so happy that I blindly believed I should have known you'd disappoint me All over again
But, you promised you'll be here for me You promised you'll always come to see me But you never came And I said I never cared Cause it hurts a lot less to just not care
so, what do you guys think?
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Post by Kyla Ryan House on May 28, 2007 11:38:14 GMT -5
It could almost apply to House's relationship with his father... Very good. Better than any of mine, I'm sure.
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Post by chasesangel on May 28, 2007 11:43:05 GMT -5
thanks Kyla! and dont say that! Im sure your stuff are excellent! and you ARE right...it can fit to House too...but Iwas thinking about that memorable quite when Chase was talking with House on Cursed, saying "ithurts a lot less to just not care" and vuala! a poem...
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Post by crazedfangirl on May 28, 2007 14:08:12 GMT -5
Michal, that was wonderfuly written! I loved it... a lot! It really could apply to House, too, but, and I'm sure you meant for this to be... it reminded me of Chase/Cam. *nods* Very well written.
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Post by chasesangel on May 28, 2007 15:35:14 GMT -5
thanks a lot Deena! it means a lot to me!
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Post by Jas on May 28, 2007 16:42:23 GMT -5
-claps, cheers- wonderful
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Post by crazedfangirl on May 28, 2007 19:57:05 GMT -5
thanks a lot Deena! it means a lot to me! No problem. Anything to encourage!
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Post by chasesangel on May 29, 2007 6:28:53 GMT -5
thanks Jas! and Deena, encouraging is always fun
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Post by maddness on Jun 1, 2007 2:52:27 GMT -5
Wow I really enjoyed reading this Well done, I love how it seems to flow really well... does that even make sence? I love the last line as well. Well done.
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Post by cuddelstein on Jun 2, 2007 0:15:17 GMT -5
I really liked that! I agree with Kyla that it could apply to House and his father's relationship.
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