Kyla Ryan House
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Post by Kyla Ryan House on May 28, 2007 11:47:25 GMT -5
Alone, I walk into the night. You just stand there, Watching me leave. I hold my breath, Hoping you'll call me back. You hold your breath, Hoping I'll turn around. A sharp wave of pain, Followed by total NOTHINGNESS.
When next I open my eyes, You are at my side. The oncologist stands aloof With a worried expression. "What happened? Where am I?" "You passed out, Greg," You reply. "The doctors here think That you sprained a muscle." "Why are you here, Wilson?" "Stacy called me," The oncologist answered. "Does your leg still hurt?" I nod in affirmation To his question. "It's been nearly three days," The oncologist mutters. "Maybe it's not a sprain," I suggest. "What is it then, Greg?" You ask. "An infarction," I reply.
The pain unbearable, I fall into chemical NOTHINGNESS,
To wake up a cripple.
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Post by chasesangel on May 28, 2007 11:55:08 GMT -5
awww! that was briliant! you see! you write excelent poems! I liked how you combined a dialoge in the poem, very cool! other than that, sad poem, but good nonetheless!
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Post by maddness on Jun 1, 2007 3:01:35 GMT -5
Oh thats so sad, I loved it I love the House's point of veiw.
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